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Tin Man by Murkey
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Tin Man
I'm standing out here in the pouring rain,
Thoughts so far away, devoid of pain.
The water does nothing to my shield of apathy.
I dont feel a thing. Whatever happens to me.
The sun comes out but no emotions flicker,
Heat blazes down but noth
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spllogicsName Not Set Yet
   Forum Posts: 316 Art Reviews: Comments: 109 Age: 26 |
#3285 2006-01-05 21:44 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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dont know much about commenting on a writing. But it has a nice flow in it. I think its pertty good.
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LombiDomen Lombergar
  Forum Posts: 1977 Art Reviews: Comments: 1170 Age: 25 |
#3330 2006-01-07 10:26 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Very good choice of words, have you been published before? This stuff is very good!
Siggie!
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