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Suicide’s worst enemy by Jeff
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A light flickers in the distance
. and you can’t say no
To the voice that whispers
. [quot]it’s time to go[quot]
Ready to release all this pain
. you can’t say hi
When everytime you breathe
. you say goodbye
So is this what it
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Wayfaring StrangerName Not Set Yet
   Forum Posts: 21 Art Reviews: Comments: 45 Age: 18 |
#4494 2006-02-28 10:31 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Love the poem, completly.
One thing though that bothered me slightly, upset my reading... just using [quot]changed[quot] more than once in the fifth stanza/verse thingie. But geh... love it. |
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caraName Not Set Yet Forum Posts: 30 Art Reviews: Comments: 33 Age: 40 |
#4553 2006-03-02 05:36 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Icky neato rough sketch! I want to see this in bas relief, like a smallish dinner plate size to hang or prop. Have you ever used paper clay?
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