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LombiDomen Lombergar
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#4767 2006-03-09 18:46 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Indeed it's a bit depressing-looking. I'm not sure if you tried to achive this but i think you were. The composition confuses me a bit due to the central split of the two planes. Perhaps explain why this choice?
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#4807 2006-03-12 10:45 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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The blurry foreground on the bottom left is a bit distracting to me - maybe applying an unsharp mask on this region would make it a little less prominent, and so draw the eye towards your main subject?
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