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NightLite by SmallTwig
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A friend offered this picture for revision. Any thoughts? I don't really like it, but it's all good ;)

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VegName Not Set Yet
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#9323 2006-12-05 02:14 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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I once did a tutorial on a guy sitting on a rock; but not half as interesting as this pice. I love blur around him, and the thin white stroke keeps the image grounded in some way.
Small world hey? No crits, I like it lots. |
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#9327 2006-12-05 21:20 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Hey thanks!
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#9334 2006-12-05 22:34 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Looks good. Just not sure i like the strong white line around the person. maybe soften it a bit
Good to see someone else from the burgh. |
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#9335 2006-12-06 02:27 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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spllogics... I feel strong about th@ stroke. The guy is literally covered bythis intense light from the sky. Its totally taking over the image. If it wasn't for th@ stroke, then we'd lose him, and the tree - so just this one time, Small can get away with this.
My opinion NEway. Cool effect |
































