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my first full flash site by esprosk8er
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I am adding stuff as you can see but the looks all done i think Thanks for everyones help with the tut section they def helped when making a few things on here. O yea and be sure to sign up for the news letter and listen to all are ands the gun shys i lov

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LombiDomen Lombergar
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#3545 2006-01-16 11:17 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Looks very interesting indeed! I think the first thing that needs to be fixed is the amount of negative space around the main type. There just isn\t any. Youd be surprised on how it will drastically improve the design just by changing this.
Keep up the very good work.
Siggie!
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esprosk8erName Not Set Yet
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#3562 2006-01-17 11:57 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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hey thanks for saying its look ok what do you mean by
negative space around the main type and any ideas? if you check out the page every time you click a buttun there is like a box with some guitar tubes that they wanted i think it looks kinda off maening it dont match but idk |
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LombiDomen Lombergar
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#3565 2006-01-17 16:00 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Yes, around the main type. Start with 10px and see if anything else looks better.
Well firstly I think you should center the splash content in the table, since now it's located off from left for a couple of hundred pixels and then space till the end of the site. Probably an issue with people over 1024x768. I find the right click modification thingie a bit weird, don't think anyone will use a feature like this naturally. In case you want to improve the playing box also you need to change the border of the page to a kind of grungy border you are using across the site.
Siggie!
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#3579 2006-01-18 04:30 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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this rocks.. great use of colour and good font choice.
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#3582 2006-01-18 10:41 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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thanks ill try some of that out tonight and see how it goes. i know the right click thing is not somthing people do but jsut incase its there
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