Interesting coloring, but I have some issues with the image: the way the rain is depicted is a bit unnatural to me, the texture used instead of it is way too symetrical and it comes out as a curtain more in the end.

I also think that the mother-holding-baby-image looks more like a picture painted on the wall than a thought in the person's head. Can't really see a way to fix this at the moment, perhaps having a very slight image up in the sky would be a good try?

Anyway, keep up the good work.