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Lonely Bird by spllogics
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Sometimes its best to let them go. To let them be free. If they come back then is it really meant to be?
"FLy away, Fly away, and be free.
But please come back. come back someday"
Just something i was playing with in some free time.
Let me kn
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CofName Not Set Yet
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#5433 2006-03-28 16:59 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Yay, good to see you submitting pieces here again Jason
 " border="0" alt="icon_smile.gif" />Is it a beach background? Might want to give it a bit more perspective if you can, distorting the horizon horizontally outwards (does that even make sense lol) Looks very good anyway, :artist: |
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spllogicsName Not Set Yet
  Forum Posts: 316 Art Reviews: Comments: 109 Age: 26 |
#5436 2006-03-28 21:39 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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thanks bro.
No not a beach its sky. but now that you mention it, it does sorta look like the beach. maybe ill add a bit more clouds. |
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korrosyveName Not Set Yet Forum Posts: Art Reviews: Comments: 16 Age: |
#5438 2006-03-29 00:16 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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hm, yeah, i would definately bring out the clouds more if its not a beach, for i was going to leave a similar comment suggesting more prespective for the beach.
I have some pretty nice pictures of clouds you can play with and make your own if you're in need |
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LombiDomen Lombergar
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#5474 2006-03-30 04:48 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Looks very nice, specially the colors and the general feeling. However the two huge things you need to fix is the nasty looking shadow of the cage on the girl (just a huge black blob now) and the fact that the composition is rather silly. Crop Jason, crop
Siggie!
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Tore13Name Not Set Yet Forum Posts: Art Reviews: Comments: 18 Age: |
#5486 2006-03-30 05:42 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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eccellente opera
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spllogicsName Not Set Yet
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#5494 2006-03-30 11:16 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Lombi thanks alot for the comment an critic will fix that when i get a min. was cropped alot from the original i have will try a tighter crop next time.
Tore. thanks |
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LostDarknightBojan Toporiš
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#5510 2006-03-31 03:43 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Cool
This is such a sad planet ,planet hell, world of pain a black hole for our souls.
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sethName Not Set Yet
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#5513 2006-03-31 04:22 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Awsome work.
I love the atmosphere and tones used. |
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#7245 2006-06-18 01:12 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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thas wonderful ,as u told me in idea too
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#9029 2006-11-02 06:53 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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oh well i didnt see it as a beach before someone said it. hehe. the birds show it is a sky but beach does makes sense too. =). but total up... this piece is cool. nice concept. yeah if the thing was meant to be, it'll come back.
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