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invisible hand by duc
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Well this was one of my first work, it's all pretty much about photography, just deleted some of the hand.. tell me please what do you think.. ty for all comments
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spllogicsName Not Set Yet
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#5428 2006-03-28 15:24 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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the hand needs alot of work . theres a few masking issues around the edges that make it look to cut out. then it definatly needs some shadows to make it not look so flat and just pasted on. Then the and seems to over saturated for the image you are using for the face. try changing the hue and saturation.
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M-ticMatic Justin
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#5431 2006-03-28 16:38 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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You need to spend more time with it spllogics tolled you moste of the things and since its an invisible hand i think that this color is very unapropriate, it should be atleast peal or something more goastly.
Justin
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ygnazName Not Set Yet
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#5439 2006-03-29 05:08 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Without shadows it's very unrealistic.
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forgotten-mythName Not Set Yet
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#5449 2006-03-29 12:18 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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not that i think realism was the objective here.. but.. i mean, copy and pasting pictures on top of eachother like this... its' beginners stuff... and he copy and pasted it pretty good :-P
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LombiDomen Lombergar
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#5475 2006-03-30 04:53 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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It's good for beginner work, yes, but should probably have some more refining. The hand for instance drops opacity over the lip and does not go fully ot the end of the face.
If you fix it it will look much better. And perhaps some tighter cropping.
Siggie!
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#5500 2006-03-30 16:50 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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i dont mean to be rude at all, but i'm not sure what you were getting at with this? it looks like it might have been a good excersize for familiarizing yourself with tricks and tools, but its the type of thing you put in your personal sketch book and never show anyone ;)
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