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Internal Suicide by StargazinDesigns
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Angry Eyes
Harsh Screams
Mixed Emotions
Flowing tears
Sadness falls
So alone...
Alone, alone, alone
Slipping slowly
Darkness falls
Confusion setting
Stabbing pain
Cutting Deep...
Deeper, deeper, deeper
Another life wasted
Nothing mattered
Eyes close
Mouth
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FeathersakatheravenName Not Set Yet
   Forum Posts: 43 Art Reviews: Comments: 183 Age: 19 |
#2035 2005-11-29 04:05 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Nice image, very...moving poem as well....umm i would have made the words more faint, at the moment your eyes are drawn towards them rather than the hand. Apart from that it's a good image, i like the hand and the background image, the layers go well together
Good Work! Adam |
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LombiDomen Lombergar
  Forum Posts: 1977 Art Reviews: Comments: 1170 Age: 25 |
#2053 2005-11-29 10:30 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Incredibly painful choice of words and thus very powerful poem. Well done.
Siggie!
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