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I'm going to walk away and know you don't care... by Jeff
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// I just wanted to tell you //
// I like this one for one //
// reason, that is that its //
// out of order in some //
// verses so... it's it could //
// be one of my most cre-
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styleteam.oeName Not Set Yet
   Forum Posts: 2 Art Reviews: Comments: 9 Age: 22 |
#5135 2006-03-22 11:44 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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did you do this in "PAINT"? i think the builder of "artworld" should not let any stuff be posted on their site.. this only means a loss of quality..
and it's about quality, not quantity |
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M-ticMatic Justin
 Forum Posts: 223 Art Reviews: Comments: 654 Age: 21 |
#5138 2006-03-22 11:53 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Nice poem, can't say anything's wrong with it i have never written one.
Styleteam.oe it about the poem here not the imiage  " border="0" alt="icon_smile.gif" />
Justin
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JeffJeff Smithey
 Forum Posts: 514 Art Reviews: Comments: 61 Age: 20 |
#5152 2006-03-22 15:38 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Yeah, it's about the poem... that's my CS spray ;) I just look for random images to use for my images when I post poems...
Working on two big projects right now. Get hyped or not. It doesn't matter. Ha.
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CofName Not Set Yet
 Forum Posts: 537 Art Reviews: Comments: 404 Age: 19 |
#5158 2006-03-22 16:26 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Nice poem Jeff, I cant give anything constructive on it since I havn't a clue what to do
" border="0" alt="icon_smile.gif" />Do you only do your drawings and poems seperately, I never recall having seen any posted together with a link |
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LombiDomen Lombergar
 Forum Posts: 1977 Art Reviews: Comments: 1170 Age: 25 |
#5272 2006-03-24 12:17 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Just wanted to ask what the connection with the first verse in connection to the second one is. Like, why the slashes?
I like the poem btw, and agree with cof that you should perhaps incorporate more visuals in it.
Siggie!
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JeffJeff Smithey
Forum Posts: 514 Art Reviews: Comments: 61 Age: 20 |
#5282 2006-03-24 13:30 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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The slashes are my comments not the poem. ;)
Working on two big projects right now. Get hyped or not. It doesn't matter. Ha.
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