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Froggy by Jonathan
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I am kinda getting really series about drawing and so i would love advanced crtique on how i can improve
THANKS
Jonathan
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spllogicsName Not Set Yet
   Forum Posts: 316 Art Reviews: Comments: 109 Age: 26 |
#9449 2006-12-21 11:07 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Id check this guy out. I seen his work on a herp. fourm im on. Stuff is pertty good
http://www.ty3bl.com/bannikov/gallery.html Id say you should work on the feet. Mouth seems to look to flat. Front probably isnt the best angle to start at. |
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Zy-ByonoxlleLPatricia Lugo
 Forum Posts: 88 Art Reviews: Comments: 94 Age: 18 |
#9452 2006-12-21 21:06 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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With a little more practice.. You'd be a pro.. I'd say thumb up! could do better.. More shading maybe.. and accurate curves .
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chieuwName Not Set Yet
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#9454 2006-12-22 07:33 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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yep more shadows and less lines. afree with xyzabella
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KumikoName Not Set Yet Forum Posts: 9 Art Reviews: Comments: 32 Age: |
#9455 2006-12-22 11:22 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Jonathan, here is some advice for you.
Composition: The empty space above the head is too much. A big amount of empty space tends to become dead space unless the direction of the subject is towards the space or the subject is looking at the space. Value of Shading: Direction of the light source is unclear and the outline is too strong, which causes the whole image to be flat. Adding some shadows and highlights would help. Observe the model (frog) and find where is darkest and lightest values are on the subject and add them to the drawing. Then it will help make it look more three-dimensional in quality. Tip: To get the correct shape and proportions, measurement is important. Good luck 
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