Flying.. by bytute
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They are distrait as i am ..




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#5698   2006-04-06 06:46 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
NEED HELP
i posted my image, but it doesnt appear in the gallery.
how do i see my image?

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#5700   2006-04-06 10:28 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
Bytute, nice shot. I like the composition. But I think photo may look better if you increase the brightness and/or contrast. ;)

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#5701   2006-04-06 11:16 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
thanks ygnaz " border="0" alt="icon_smile.gif" />
other tell me that i shoul decrease brightness " border="0" alt="icon_smile.gif" />

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#5702   2006-04-06 11:25 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
Cool the bird's look like bats hehe very cool! And yeah brighter " border="0" alt="icon_smile.gif" />
It has grat motion " border="0" alt="icon_biggrin.gif" />

Good shot

Justin
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#5708   2006-04-06 13:41 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
Not to be a jerk, but I have some negative critizism for this picture:

- Too long shutter-time
- Out of focus
- Perhaps too dark


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#5715   2006-04-06 15:13 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
to dark, to dark.. it was almoust night....

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#5724   2006-04-06 19:21 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
Regarding the correction of brightness, I'd say use Curves and/or Shadow & Highlights. It will give a lot more control over your outcome.

Check this tutorial for the curve tool if you want :
http://www.artworld.si/mastering_curves-tutorial-534.art

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#5750   2006-04-07 11:54 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
It's definetely too dark unless you were trying to express darkness in the image (it's probably wise to state so in the description if this is the case)

Some level or curve adjustments will fix it and make it a great shot. Perhaps even try to tone it a bit. Also a tutorial on artworld " border="0" alt="icon_smile.gif" />

Siggie!
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#5783   2006-04-08 11:44 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
I agree, the dark grey sky is really making the image heavy, and since it is all about flight and movement I would like to see it lighter. I really love the flutter of the birds, it gives this shot so much character.

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#5790   2006-04-08 14:16 GMT   Rated: Not Rated
thanks you for advice, i'll try too use it in future works

 
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