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popstylerName Not Set Yet ![]() ![]() Forum Posts: 2 Art Reviews: Comments: 6 Age: 21 |
#5698 2006-04-06 06:46 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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NEED HELP
i posted my image, but it doesnt appear in the gallery. how do i see my image? |
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ygnazName Not Set Yet
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#5700 2006-04-06 10:28 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Bytute, nice shot. I like the composition. But I think photo may look better if you increase the brightness and/or contrast. ;)
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bytuteName Not Set Yet ![]() ![]() Forum Posts: 0 Art Reviews: Comments: 6 Age: 23 |
#5701 2006-04-06 11:16 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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thanks ygnaz
other tell me that i shoul decrease brightness |
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M-ticMatic Justin
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#5702 2006-04-06 11:25 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Cool the bird's look like bats hehe very cool! And yeah brighter
It has grat motion Good shot
Justin
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LeonName Not Set Yet
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#5708 2006-04-06 13:41 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Not to be a jerk, but I have some negative critizism for this picture:
- Too long shutter-time - Out of focus - Perhaps too dark |
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bytuteName Not Set Yet ![]() ![]() Forum Posts: 0 Art Reviews: Comments: 6 Age: 23 |
#5715 2006-04-06 15:13 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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to dark, to dark.. it was almoust night....
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CofName Not Set Yet
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#5724 2006-04-06 19:21 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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Regarding the correction of brightness, I'd say use Curves and/or Shadow & Highlights. It will give a lot more control over your outcome.
Check this tutorial for the curve tool if you want : http://www.artworld.si/mastering_curves-tutorial-534.art |
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LombiDomen Lombergar
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#5750 2006-04-07 11:54 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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It's definetely too dark unless you were trying to express darkness in the image (it's probably wise to state so in the description if this is the case)
Some level or curve adjustments will fix it and make it a great shot. Perhaps even try to tone it a bit. Also a tutorial on artworld
Siggie!
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VividcatName Not Set Yet
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#5783 2006-04-08 11:44 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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I agree, the dark grey sky is really making the image heavy, and since it is all about flight and movement I would like to see it lighter. I really love the flutter of the birds, it gives this shot so much character.
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bytuteName Not Set Yet ![]() ![]() Forum Posts: 0 Art Reviews: Comments: 6 Age: 23 |
#5790 2006-04-08 14:16 GMT Rated: Not Rated |
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thanks you for advice, i'll try too use it in future works
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