I like your style. It is raw and needs work on technique, but you know that already. The gaol seems to be your style. Go for it

You can draw, no problem there but there is more to art than the ability to draw or paint. Inspiration and creativity are needed too.

Technically good people are a dime a dozen but most of them don't have a creative bone in their body.

I have been an artist for over 30 years. Tried commercial work but hated it although the money was good. But I didn't like being poor either so I found other ways to make money. Now I create on the side, do exactly what I like and when I sell a piece, it's icing on the cake.

Go to art school, refine your technique and learn new ones and make sure you get a degree so that you can at least teach. You obviously have a certain facility so why not try and develop it.

Artwork has a very dark feeling. Reminds me of Camilla Rose Garcia artwork. Maybe you could get into mature picture books, geared for adult audiences. Technique is a bit rough...but has a great feel.