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avaizhashmi
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#4979 2005-07-07 18:32 GMT |
Lombi
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#4985 2005-07-08 05:53 GMT |
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My favourites out of the bunch are Life 4 & 1. The composition is done nicely and the b&w adds to the whole feel of the photo. Much better than it would with color imho.
The two ruin photos are so so ... I mean - it's nothing special comparing a definitive point of interest that would be in a photo. The composition is nice but both photos lack that certain something. In Life two there is a bit too much centralized composition happening - as well as overburning of the highlights because of the large value span. In such a case I would sugest you turn your look a bit to the right and capture only the boys and cows. And Life 3 - great composition and everything - but seriously lacking sharpness on the cow. In case the cow wasnt looking into the camera it would be fine, but now it's an issue. Hope this bit of constructive critique helps you. :artist: |
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Siggie!
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spllogics
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#4994 2005-07-08 19:59 GMT |
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very powerful photos expecially the Life ones. thanks for sharing
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avaizhashmi
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#4998 2005-07-09 17:17 GMT |
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actualy lombi,
the cam i used aint pro + i used i for the first time. i am glad that i captured something like this!!! coming to home, i desaturated them and some contrast + brightness adjustments... i did this also for the first time... on gfxartist i have been given the same comment. espeacialy abt the over exposed areas. i will fix them and re-publish them... correction: they are not boys :P note: cam belongs to my friend |
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